You might think of a serial killer as a lot of things crazy, disturbing maybe even horrifying, but you would never say innocent about one would you? That is what happened when it came to serial killer Ted Bundy. Up until the day that he was executed friends, family, and strangers all around the world thought of Ted Bundy as an innocent man not a serial killer. An example of people believing he is innocent is the article done in People magazine that asks questions that got people thinking did he really kill all those women?
After reading this first paragraph what do you think my paper is about?
i feel your paper is a summary on the article on Ted Bundy. I would like to see more about the new ideas it created in your mind when comparing it to the original document on Holmes
ReplyDeleteWhen reading your paragraph I thought your paper would be about second guessing the conviction of a man. Maybe even what makes people believe someone is convicted of a crime.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your first paragraph, it looks like your paper is about an article on Ted Bundy. It seems like it questions whether he was innocent or not. It looks like the paper is going to describe who Ted Bundy is and why people have doubts about him being guilty of many murders. It looks like an interesting introduction!
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